My heart started to thump as I heard the sound of teens yelling and laughing.
"Bye Bye sweetie. Have a nice day at school," my mom said, almost as if it was forced.
"Yah yah what evs," I mumbled to myself.
I mean she can't expect me to be all cheerful and excited about moving and going to a new school full of people I knew nothing about. It is sooooooooooo unrealistic! So, I took a big breath and stepped out of the door. Just then I heard the sound of wheels, once again, crunching on the gravel driveway. I knew that mom had already driven off. So here I am, all alone, with no friends, and once again... ALL ALONE!!!!!!
2 comments:
I liked your story because I think it was funny when the girl was getting really mad about her first day of school. I also liked it becuase it was descriptive. I think this story is really good. I hope you write more or post more or whatever. Good Job! Keep writing! I think I have five sentences so I'm going to stop typing.
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