"Mom I don't want to go to school! I don't even know anyone there. I have NO friends," I emphasized the NO.
"Karen how many times do I have to tell you that your gonna make new friends," said my mom, who was probably exasperated. "Just think about your brother, Joel, he is so excited for school. All you have to do is say "Hi, I'm Karen. What's your name?"
"Yah mom. like I'm really gonna go up to all the goodie goodies and act like a retard!" I replied.
"Honey having nice manners doesn't make you a retard," mom exclaimed.
"Well obviously here it does," I said, quite frankly.
My mom just rolled her eyes and kept driving. I sighed and just rested, I didn't want anymore stress than I already have.
4 comments:
I like your story because it is really descriptive and funny. I have read all of the chapters. I think you should write more of them. They are really good. You should turn this story into a book and like actually sell it to people.
I think you are writing a good story. When you are done with the whole story you should make a book because you have a great story and if you publish it you can share it so every one can read it. When you are done you should start another story. You could write a story for lilly larkspur !!! Jk Jk jK I like this chapter because you put lots of details in it, and I think it is funny that she thinks manners make you retarded.
Hey Hannah this is really good(:
I liked this because you are really good at the dialog. Also this made me laugh since it kinda makes you think. I would have felt just like that girl that had to move to a new school. Good writing, keep writing :)
Hannah! I LIKED THIS BECAUSE IT WAS SOOO FUNNY and SOOOOO TRUE! I loved how she wAs like, thell think im a retard part, and the moms like, people wont think you a retard. Hannah, your hilarious!
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