As I stepped into the house, I saw wood floors, marble counter tops, and a large flight of stairs to my left. As I climbed the stairs, many thoughts were racing through my mind. Like "Why did we move here? It is a nice house though. I wonder what Lilly is doing right now? ..." The list went on and on. When I got to the top of the stairs, I saw a door right across from me. I opened it and I saw white walls splashed with sun light. I decided this would be my room. I set my backpack down and looked out my window. I shielded my eyes from the glare of the sun while looking over the lawn and the beach.
"Sooo . . . How do you like it?" asked my mom, I noticed her voice was overly enthusiastic.
"It's pretty nice.” I said in a dull, lifeless voice.
"Well I'm glad it's Ok. Your dad will come up with your stuff in a minute. Ok?" my mom asked, probably expecting some overly enthusiastic voice to match hers.
"What evs." I said. Not really wanting to talk right now.
I guess mom sensed that and she left. So once again I was in my room. I took one last glance before dad walked in.
"Hey honey. What do you think? Did I pick the right house or did I pick the right house?" he joked, that cheered me up a little. I am always grateful for dad's humor!
"It's not that bad, I guess, The room is pretty nice and so is the view." I replied honestly.
"Well I'm glad your excellency is pleased," he said, smiling the whole time.
I giggled, I didn't want to ruin his good mood, so I gave him a hug and thanked him for moving here. Even though I still wish I was in Tennessee.
2 comments:
OMG! Hannah, I didnt know you were such a writer! You put soo much voice into your character, It actually seemed like shes real! You used excellant description, and i love the way you made her tell why she was feeling that way. She has a good sense of humor, it kinda reminds me of someone...who could that be? Wait..let me think..Aahh yes, YOU! You always have an awesome sense of humer hannah, i think you get that from your mom. Shes really funny, (in a good way.) Keep up the good work habibi! Good job, i cant wait to hear the rest.
Hey Hannah, I liked this alot becaus your descriptions of the room and girl made this entry like a movie.
For some reason I saw you instead of the character..... but you definitely have some unknown talent beneath all that muscle. lol.
But I loved yer desriptions! really good. keep it goin'
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